Stream of Conscience, you've done a good job of using a second personal narrator and yet maintianing a stream of consciousness. Somewhere, I lost track of the other person in the scene. Is that intentional?
I'm curious to read more of this intriguiing episode.
i did this intentionally. it is in effort to portray the feeling of looking back on the past overtaking the present. i do not have this 100% planned, but i intend it as an exploration of memory and what we might take with us as keychains for our grief and general loss and how those thoughts roll around the skull. always glad to pique your curiousity, Sandy. thank you for reading.
Stream of Conscience, you've done a good job of using a second personal narrator and yet maintianing a stream of consciousness. Somewhere, I lost track of the other person in the scene. Is that intentional?
I'm curious to read more of this intriguiing episode.
i did this intentionally. it is in effort to portray the feeling of looking back on the past overtaking the present. i do not have this 100% planned, but i intend it as an exploration of memory and what we might take with us as keychains for our grief and general loss and how those thoughts roll around the skull. always glad to pique your curiousity, Sandy. thank you for reading.